Secret Thoughts of Angels :: Production Notes :: Shooting Script

 

               FADE IN:

           1   INT. LIBRARY -- DAY   

               JESS (25) walks amongst corridors of old books.  She picks 
               some from the shelves and carries them back to a table.

               The pile of books goes down as Jess works through them, 
               but she can't find what she's looking for.

               She slams the final book shut in frustration.

           2   INT. CHURCH -- DAY   

               ALICE (30) is sat on the back pew in church.

               Jess comes in and joins her.

                                     ALICE
                         Anything? 

                                     JESS
                         Nothing.

                                     ALICE
                         Can we go home now?

                                     JESS
                         Nope, Rye next... then home.

                                     ALICE
                         Rye!  Oh Jess, that's a hundred 
                         miles in the wrong direction.  
                         This is getting too much!  Face 
                         it, you're not going to find 
                         anything.

                                     JESS
                         But...

                                     ALICE
                         What is the point of all this?  Dr 
                         Crabtree already said your thesis 
                         is good to go.  Just leave it be.

                                     JESS
                         This is my career at stake here.

                                     ALICE
                         I know, but you're scaring me. 

                                     JESS
                         Please Alice...

                                     ALICE
                         I'm sorry Jess.  This book is 
                         becoming an obsession and I don't 
                         like it. If you want it that badly, you'll
                         have to find it on your own. 
                         
           3   INT. DR CRABTREE'S OFFICE -- DAY     
                                               
               Jess is sat on a chair across the cluttered desk from DR
               CRABTREE (40's).                     
                                                
                                     DR CRABTREE   
                         So how are we doing?  Crossing the 
                         I's and dotting the T's, I hope. 
                                                     
                                     JESS           
                         Well, yeah.  Kind of...    
                                                   
                                     DR CRABTREE   
                         Oh for goodness sake, you're not 
                         still on this damned crusade are 
                         you?                             

                                     JESS       
                         If that book doesn't exist, half   
                         my thesis will be pulled apart as  
                         irrelevant conjecture.           
                                                       
                                     DR CRABTREE       
                         Oh that's nonsense.  Your supporting  
                         arguments are more than convincing.   
                                                       
                                     JESS                 
                         Are they?  I don't think so.  I   
                         need that book.                  
                                                          
                                     DR CRABTREE          
                         Please Jess, you've just over a  
                         week left, don't waste it.       
                                                          
           4   EXT. OUTSKIRTS OF RYE -- DAY        
                                                                     
               Jess drives past a sign announcing 'Welcome to Rye'.
                                                       
           5   INT. WIDDERSHINS ANTIQUE BOOK SHOP -- DAY  
                                                                          
               As Jess enters the shop the head of MR WIDDERSHINS (60's) 
               cranes round a stack of books on the counter.         
                                                                     
                                     MR WIDDERSHINS              
                         Hello, can I help you?                  
                                                                 
                                     JESS                      
                         Hi.  Yes, I'm looking for books on    
                         Alchemy?                              
                                                               
                                     MR WIDDERSHINS            
                         Anything specific?                    
                                                               
                                     JESS
                         Yes... 'Celare Sensa de Angelis' 
                         It's by a woman who called herself 
                         the Mistress of the Marsh...

                                     MR WIDDERSHINS
                         Ah... 

                                     JESS
                         You know it!?  Do you have a copy?

                                     MR WIDDERSHINS
                         I'm not sure that I do... In fact, 
                         I'm certain I don't.

                                     JESS
                         Do you know anyone that might?  I 
                         need it quite urgently.

                                     MR WIDDERSHINS
                         You've tried the British Library?

                                     JESS
                         Yes.  And at least fifty others...

                                     MR WIDDERSHINS
                         So what's the hurry?

                                     JESS
                         My PhD thesis is due in next week.  
                         As it stands I'm sure it won't get 
                         picked up for publication.

                                     MR WIDDERSHINS
                         PhD!  You wouldn't by any chance 
                         be a student of Dr Crabtree?

                                     JESS
                         Yes.

                                     MR WIDDERSHINS
                         Nice chap, comes in here 
                         occasionally.

                                     JESS
                         You're sure you don't know anywhere 
                         else that may have a copy?

                                     MR WIDDERSHINS
                         Alas, I suspect your search for 
                         that particular literary gem will 
                         prove most fruitless.

                                     JESS
                         Well... Thanks then...

                                     MR WIDDERSHINS
                         Good bye. 

               Mr Widdershins watches Jess leave the shop then turns and 
               heads into his back room.  

               Kneeling down he opens an old safe, inside of which there 
               is a small, triangular package wrapped in protective cloth.

               He unravels it to reveal a very old leather bound book, 
               the shape of an equilateral triangle.

               He glances at the spine upon which is embossed in gilt 
               writing, 'Celare Sensa de Angelis' and strokes it gently 
               before opening it carefully.

               He leafs through dry pages full of illegible writing and 
               ornate drawings.

               Between two pages there is a ragged piece of paper with a 
               fading illustration of a woman.  He picks it out and hold 
               it up to the light.  

               The woman bears an uncanny resemblance to Jess.

           6   INT. JESS AND ALICE'S FLAT -- DAY  

               Jess is sat hammering away at her computer.  Alice comes 
               in through the front door.

                                     ALICE
                         Hi!

               Jess ignores her and continues typing.  Alice turns on the 
               radio.

                                     RADIO PRESENTER
                              (on radio)
                         And finally, pagan groups up and 
                         down the country are preparing to 
                         celebrate the occurrence of an 
                         unusual astrological event this 
                         weekend.  The conjunction of Mars, 
                         Neptune, Mercury and Venus...

               Jess stomps over and switches the radio off.

                                     JESS
                         Do you mind?  Some of us are 
                         working!

                                     ALICE
                         Like I hadn't noticed?  Look at 
                         this place!  It's a tip - I can't 
                         do it all myself.

                                     JESS
                         I tidied up!

                                     ALICE
                         No, you moved it from there to 
                         over there.  

                                     JESS
                         I'll do it next week.

                                     ALICE
                         Make sure you do.  If you can't 
                         keep up the rent, at least have 
                         the decency to help out a little.

                                     JESS
                         Sorry. 

                                     ALICE
                         Anyway, some courier guy was outside 
                         a minute ago - he left this.

               Alice hands Jess a small parcel wrapped in brown paper. 

               Jess looks at the unexpected package and opens it carefully.  
               It is the triangular book. 

           7   INT. DR CRABTREE'S OFFICE -- DAY 

               The phone rings, Dr Crabtree picks it up.

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         Peter Crabtree?... Hello Jess... 
                         For what?... Oh... Yes, yes, an 
                         old colleague of mine remembered 
                         he had a copy...  Just don't forget, 
                         time is short.  Give yourself 'til 
                         the weekend to see if it will answer 
                         your questions.  I still need your 
                         thesis by next Wednesday.

           8   INT. JESS AND ALICE'S FLAT -- DAY   

               Montage: Jess tries to fathom the secrets of the book.  
               She tries reading it at different angles, poring over it 
               with a magnifying glass, tracing out the strange pictures 
               and piecing them together, scanning the pages in on her 
               computer to enhance the writing.  She works non-stop, 
               through day and night.

               She finally gives up, shuts the book and holds her head in 
               despair.

           9   INT. JESS AND ALICE'S FLAT -- NIGHT

               Jess and Alice are slumped on the sofa.  Jess is a mess, 
               she hasn't slept properly in days.  She stares intently at 
               the book, while Alice watches the TV.

                                     TV REPORTER
                              (On TV)
                         ...and so it is to here on the 
                         Romney Marsh this Saturday night, 
                         that pagan groups from around the 
                         country will descend to celebrate
                         what they are calling a festival 
                         of light.  As the planets align 
                         themselves in the south-east corner
                         of the sky... 
                                             
                                     ALICE    
                         Oh great, just what I need, an 
                         influx of weirdos into the pub on
                         Saturday night when we're short  
                         staffed.                              
                                                                   
               There is a knock at the door. 
                                                                       
               Jess glances at the clock.  Nine twenty-five.  She looks 
               at Alice, who indicates she's not expecting anyone.    
                                                                      
               Jess opens the door to find Dr Crabtree stood there. 
                                                               
                                     DR CRABTREE                    
                         Hello Jess.  Thought I'd stop by.  
                         See how you're getting on.          
                                                              
               She stands back and lets him in.              
                                                              
               He spies the book that she is clutching.       
                                                              
                                     DR CRABTREE (CONT'D)   
                         May I?                              
                                                             
               She offers him the book.  
                                                          
                                     DR CRABTREE (CONT'D)  
                         So she's not yielding her secrets 
                         easily then? 
                                                            
                                     JESS                      
                         It's all nonsense.  The rantings    
                         of a deranged old woman.  And yet    
                         people talk about this book as if   
                         it were one of the greatest texts  
                         of the last millennium.            
                                                        
                                     ALICE       
                         Perhaps they haven't really seen  
                         the book at all.  Perhaps it has  
                         always been a load of cobblers.  
                                                              
                                     JESS                     
                         You Philistine, Alice.  No, there's  
                         got to more to this book. 
                                                              
                                     DR CRABTREE 
                         Whatever, promise me you'll treasure 
                         it.  And in terms of your thesis,  
                         look beyond the text and think  
                         more about the impact it has had. 
                                                             
               He hands Jess back the book.                  

                                     DR CRABTREE (CONT'D)
                         I'll see myself out.

               Jess slumps back down onto the sofa and takes up obsessing 
               about the book again, staring at the ornate frontispiece.

                                     ALICE
                         Odd.  I didn't think Dr Crabtree 
                         lived anywhere near here... Jess?

               Jess is absorbed in the book, the front cover has caught 
               her attention.  She runs her fingertip along the bottom 
               edge of the inside cover and peels back the leather and a 
               page that has been held tight pops out, folding out along 
               the top edge of the book.

                                     JESS
                         Oh...  My...  God! 

               The back cover does the same.  These new front and back 
               pages fold out once, then twice to form a hexagon which 
               when taken as a whole present a single page containing the 
               image of an angel surrounded by handwritten text.

          10   INT. DR CRABTREE'S OFFICE -- DAY 

               The book lays unfolded on Dr Crabtree's desk.

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         It's incredible!  

                                     JESS
                         It's scary.

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         How?

                                     JESS
                         I don't know... it's very... real.  
                         It's some kind of ritual, possibly 
                         a mind reading spell?  But look 
                         here, it can only be performed by 
                         a woman.

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         This is very exciting, but I can 
                         see a very big fly in the ointment.  
                         We haven't checked the authenticity 
                         of the book.

                                     JESS
                         Do we need to? 

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         You know we do.

                                     JESS
                         Can't you pull some strings down 
                         at the labs.

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         No, samples would have to be sent 
                         away, which would take three weeks.

                                     JESS
                         So that's it then?  After all this 
                         I still can't use it?

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         If there were a way that we could 
                         prove the authenticity of the book 
                         now, I might be prepared to put my 
                         reputation on the line and validate 
                         the book, in lieu of the tests 
                         coming back positive.

                                     JESS
                         That's brilliant!  How?

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         Do the ritual.  Any strange 
                         experiences would lend weight to 
                         it's authenticity.

                                     JESS
                         No way, that's not what I'm about.  
                         There's power in those words.  
                         I've never seen anything like them.

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         Oh come now.  Mild hallucinations?  
                         Dizziness?  Euphoric states of 
                         bliss?  Could be fun!

                                     JESS
                         Oh my God!  That's what this is 
                         all about isn't it?

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         What? 

                                     JESS
                         You didn't send me this, did you?

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         Yes!  Well... not exactly.

                                     JESS
                         Care to enlighten me?

                                     DR CRABTREE
                         I... I really can't help you there.

                                     JESS
                         Then neither can I... 

               Jess storms up the road watched from the back seat of a 
               large saloon car parked by Mr Widdershins.  He pulls out a 
               mobile phone and dials.

                                     MR WIDDERSHINS
                         Have you failed again Peter?

          12   INT. JESS AND ALICE'S FLAT -- DAY  

               Alice comes in to find Jess poring over the angel. 

                                     ALICE
                         Haven't you given up on that yet?

                                     JESS
                         Oh, I don't know...

               She points next to the book to two bound copies of her 
               thesis.

                                     ALICE
                         You finished it!  Come down the 
                         pub this evening, you can celebrate 
                         with all your weirdo friends.

                                     JESS
                         No thanks... 

               Alice hands Jess another parcel. 

                                     ALICE
                         Here, this'll cheer you up.  Another 
                         mystery package!

               Jess takes the package and opens it to find it full of 
               money.  There is a note with it that says, 'Another £5,000 
               if you perform the ritual tonight.'

               Alice grabs the note and reads it. 

                                     ALICE (CONT'D)
                         You're not are you?  I thought you 
                         didn't believe in all this stuff?  
                         It's purely academic you said.

                                     JESS
                         Yes... but... 

                                     ALICE
                         And if it wasn't Dr Crabtree that 
                         sent you the book, who did?  We 
                         don't know who these people are - 
                         they could be Satanists!

                                     JESS
                         Dr Crabtree isn't a bad man.  He 
                         wouldn't mix with those types...  
                                                           
                                     ALICE                    
                         But they can't treat you like this!  
                         You're not a prostitute.  You're     
                         not seriously going to do it?       
                                                              
                                     JESS                    
                         I... I have to...                   
                                                              
                                     ALICE                     
                         No!  You can't.  Not in my flat!      
                                               
          13   INT. JESS AND ALICE'S FLAT -- NIGHT
                                                                              
               Jess and Dr Crabtree survey their handiwork.  The furniture   
               has all been moved to the side of the room, the basic shape   
               of an angel has been marked out on the floor in white, the    
               hexagon around it.  Hieroglyphs and symbols adorn each        
               corner of the hexagon.                                       
                                                                           
                                     DR CRABTREE                           
                         You don't have to do this.                       
                                                                        
                                     JESS                               
                         It's OK, I've got aspirin if I get             
                         a headache.                                    
                                                                        
                                     DR CRABTREE                        
                         And Alice?                                     
                                                                         
                                     JESS                                 
                         Working.                                          
                                                                           
               Jess sets about the ritual, moving about the room and reads
               from the book.  Dr Crabtree watches on.                       
                                                                         
               Finally Jess places the book at the centre of the hexagon 
               and positions herself between the angels wings, closes her 
               eyes and intones the last part of the ritual.              
                                                                          
               Behind her, the front door opens and Alice comes in.  She  
               stares aghast at the scene.                                
                                                                          
                                     ALICE                               
                         Jess!                                           
                                                                         
               Jess' eyes snap open wide, but she's not looking into the 
               room now...                                               
                                                                          
          14   EXT. THE ROMNEY MARSH - JESS' POV-- DAY 
                                                                        
               A mysterious light makes the sky luminescent.  Crows caw 
               and wheel above in a sunless sky.                        
                                                                         
               A strange ethereal sound fills the air, like the wind softly 
               screaming a strangled melody.  Jess' breath pounds hard.   
                                                                          
               A woman in her forties, an older version of Jess, stands a 
               short distance away, her long flowing clothes and wavy    
               hair ripple gently in the breeze.                         


               She begins to float forwards.  Her hand reaches up and, 
               with a sharp crack, the world goes black.

                                                               FADE OUT:
For more information e-mail: info@secretthoughtsofangels.co.uk
© Andy Coughlan 2006